Look at the power point about expanded noun phrases.
Now write a list of expanded noun phrases to describe the personality and appearance of a character below.
Think about the character of the old gentleman from The Railway Children.
How can you describe his appearance and personality using expanded noun phrases?
Using the character template, label with as many descriptive phrases as you can.
Using your ideas from yesterday, begin to put these into sentences. Use the table template to organise your descriptive phrases into each subheading.
Create a descriptive paragraph about the old gentleman. How many different expanded noun phrases can you include into your writing? Remember to keep reading over what you have written and edit as you go along.
Look at your work from yesterday. Create a checklist of things you need to focus on when editing your work. This could be to use capital letters and full stops or to check spellings. Then go through your work and edit your writing to make it the best you can do. Once you are happy with it, write this out in your neatest handwriting.